Vashelite's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[HDC: Senator vs. Obsideo]

Well damn I like the styles of both of these dudes, so its a hard decision lol, Senator has the best delivery hands down, Obsideo was good without question but the delivery really killed him on this one, Vote is for Senator, sorry Obsideo your beats are fire and dont hates meh lol!

[Music Box]

Whoa, I am using this you dont even gotta worry about finishing it hahaha, any good engineer would understand why lol.

I love the vibe it gives me.

Obsideo responds:

Thank you! Let me know what you come up with

[Fresh Air]

Good shit! just not my style.

Obsideo responds:

Thanks, yo!

[Video World]

Not bad man, the lyrics are there, your delivery needs work and that only comes with practice, listen to my older songs and then listen to my newer ones and that a blatant truth, other than that your song is on point. Beat isn't bad, your voice is ok, and the reason I say its ok is because it feels like its lacking confidence in what your saying.

When I first noticed the lack of confidence in my voice I would send my raw input to an effects chain and throw a reverb and a compressor on it to boost the volume and give it pressence so when I hear myself when im recording I sounded better and it would help me rap with confidence in what I was saying.

As for the delivery I cant really explain how to improve on that, its just something you have to learn on yourself while spitting in sync with the instrumental.

Well I hope that helped a little bro, keep on practicing and I wish you the best of luck.

5.00 and 4,

Vashelite

[Haze]

I love this man!

Obsideo responds:

Thank you!

[Old School]

I think your sounds aren't that bad man, the problem I see is this:

Your drumline is fairly weak, I couldn't even attempt to freestyle on it, due to the lack of a clear and distinctive snare.

There was also a complete lack of bass.
Bass adds to the rhythm of the track which not only makes the overall project sound better but also makes it easier for the artist to record to the instrumental.

Please note that I am not hating, just trying to help.

Peace,

Vashelite

ClubCreator responds:

Thanks for the tips.

[HipHop Instrumental]

This actually isn't bad at all man, nice job :)

[Anyne want 2 rap to this?]

:D nice beat

[DOLLARS POUNDS YEN]

Its sad, but this style is actually popular among the main stream, good job.

Tarteviant responds:

Thanks :) I was just playing with some percussions but hey Thanks lol

[BCT - Logical Lyrics]

Niiice, Diggin your flow dude real chill better than 75% of the shit ive heard on here, mad props 5/5 10/10

Real shit!

Vashelite

BummerCityTown responds:

I really appreciate that man. Thank You!