Vashelite's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[I Scream, You Scream (Rap)]

Interesting

well lets start shall we.

Pros:

You're style has "I don't give a fuck all over it" . (Thats a good thing)
Lyrics are pretty good.
Pretty decent choice of beat.
Hook is catchy.
Its mixed together nicely

Cons:

Even though the lyrics are good you lack rythme.
There is a lack of emotion behind the lyrics.
You could use a more serious tone in you're message.

Well thats about it but overall pretty decent track 5/7

Hate it or love it, 5 it or shove it,

Vashelite.

Unknown865 responds:

Thanks
And next time I might actually make the song have to do with something.

[I got my style(feat Vashelite)]

Came out pretty good!

Here is my Lyrics

Chorus: I got that style mayne
I got the flow whoa
I got that weed so
Roll that shit up Bro
I got that style mayne
I got the flow bro
I got that weed so
Roll that shit up Bro

Verse:
Did you really think you would have me beat
I'm waiting for the day you would encroach(google it!) on me
N I got pissed off waiting in the street so I kicked you're
moms door in and slaped the beech only to find out you ran from me
and thats one thing that really gets to me n thats people
actin and trying to be something that they arent like being
an emcee and imma watch you go down like a sub-marine imma use you're
kneck for a fucken golf tee and thats one thing you gotta learn about me
I never speak alot and I never speak alittle never to hard and never to
brittle harmonized perfect, right in the middle and Imma play you're girl
like a god damned fiddle.

lol

Broken-Needle responds:

ima put em up

[Ex!!!- To Each His Own Promo]

I'm diggin this

Dude has flow, that I can respect.

And he does stand out just because isn't shit like most of the rappers I hear on NG
yet people on this site LOVE half the bullshit that comes out, maybe its just my southern style, but this shits throwed.

EternalXIII responds:

Manifess is a dope rapper! He liked the instrumental that I had on my myspace and basically asked if he could tear it up. I agreed but when I actually got the file, I was blown away. He ripped it hard!!! Glad people are digging it!!

[Delinquent 100]

Nice.

I used this beat the name of it is called "Flow Riden" check it out.

Sorry for not asking was just feeling it to much.

Really Nice Beat Though!

DJ-Delinquent responds:

No Problem were all creative commons here arent we ^-^;;

Share alike ^,^b

[So sick of love.. remake]

Hmm nice production

Keep it up!

Inka-Wall responds:

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[Let's go BN edition(diss)]

Not Bad

Shit Dude Next Time You GO to making a diss holla at me ill mix it for you ill just need you to record on the beats ;)

Broken-Needle responds:

lol, aight Ima put ma' new diss track up 1st. Next time Ima holla at you u bout dat. Lol, I try an stay on da beat I still can't flow but I'm better on da track I'm bout 2 put up. Anyway thanks fo' da scores, review and da offer,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[When Death Becomes You]

Watta Joke

wat a joke

Platinum-Chrome responds:

listen to dead ma walkin,its fo hatas like you bitch

[Platinum-Intro A new Beginnig]

Do I Even Gotta Comment

Well No Diversity at all and no melody try slowing your tempo down and adding a bit more space between your samples instruments and shit and the snap try some kicks to. wouldnt hurt to put some vocals down to

but other than those major errors a pretty crappy submission Xd it and if you want beef for my brutaly honest review then grab a plate and get your fill ill make sure to bookmark your page cause imma beef type of guy ;) your free to judge my beats aswell be honest i love honesty and love diss tracks about me even more so do yo thang

Platinum-Chrome responds:

so what u sayin,i got my fork and plate ready,if u want beef,e-mail me,or just lay low

[Lies By A5UKA]

Nice

lol you got tha Fruity Loops Down your melodys are cold smoothe couldnt think of any suggestions for it off the top but keep it up

The Vash

A5UKA responds:

haha thanks homie

but i dont use FL HAHA

i use reason 3.0

~1~

[Broken Needle vs. Humpers003]

Killed Em

ROTFL nice killed em and if you want send me the beat and vocals seperate and ill remix it for you my yim is vash_the_stampead1 peace and i voted 5 lol check my new beat out to called life in the studio

Broken-Needle responds:

aight ima check ya shit out an send ya da shit soon as I get back from da store, thanks fo' da good review an ya 5,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out